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TOPIC: Active Rain

Re: Active Rain 15 years 9 months ago #5721

I posted my first blog on active rain and if you have a chance take a look at let me know what you think.

If you have any thoughts on blogs let me know as there are a few areas of the Active rain blog that I am not familiar with.

My first agent contact went well. She wants me to drop off business cards.
I can see where active rain could generate a lot of business.

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Re: Active Rain 15 years 9 months ago #5723

David
Just to make things easy could you post the url to your a.r. blog

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Gerry Pallotta
Alota Home Inspection Services
Greater Toronto Area Home Inspector
Mississauga Home Inspector
Inspecting the following areas
Toronto,Mississauga,Brampton,Oakville,Vaughan,Richmond Hill,Markham and Pickering

Re: Active Rain 15 years 9 months ago #5724

I found your blog and wanted to give some advice.  If your going to market to a large audience, watch your grammar....

Use he/she or him/her  or your

You don't want to alienate a gender.  Always have someone else proof read, you correct, and have someone else proof read again.

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Re: Active Rain 15 years 9 months ago #5728

As you can tell grammar/english was not one of my best subjects.

Here is the web link. http://activerain.com/blogs/clevelandhomeinspector


Where did I alienate a gender?

Post away on the my blog. Any comments or recommendations are welcome.

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Last Edit: by David Macy.

Re: Active Rain 15 years 9 months ago #5736

"With an energy audit the owner will know exactly were his energy losses are."

You should go back and edit your blog to say "his/her energy"...

Also you don't want people outside our little group to see us critique your blog!  You want positive responses on your blog to portray a nice neat tidy business.  Its all about appearances.

Keep in mind that everything you do on Active Rain is advertisement in some way or another.

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Last Edit: by John Sopher.

Re: Active Rain 15 years 9 months ago #5737

Thanks

I did not see the error until you pointed it out.

I created a few newsletters and I send to a friend before I submit as I always have numerous grammar errors.

I really appreciate your feedback.

I am just trying to generate some business.

It is hard to spend 10K on a camera with the business being so slow.

I am definetly going for training and I will do what I can with an affordable camera.

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